Reflective Journal 16
We came to the presentation eager to hear everyone's recordings and one thing I knew from the very first presentation was that the reviews that Tim and Leon were going to give were going to be straightforward and honest. Sure enough when Don came up, he was told that he was too reliant on the Logic Pro software and that he should be focused on recording a raw good recording. Right after that, we proceeded to the person up next and we focused in on the melody and the lyrics which were the bread and butter of a song. The foundation. The lyrics that were shown by each person definitely brought out their intended message but in this case it was a matter of the arrangement or even choice of words. One factor we zoomed in on was the use of ' Rhyme'. Leon stated that the use of rhyming is a powerful tool to use because of its ability to evoke emotion and way of delivering a message. After this session, I decided to go home and edit the song and changed some lyrics.
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